Ring:The Many Selves of Maki Sonomura(Inktober #1)

Inktober: Day#1
For the first day of Inktober, I decided some draw and pen some Persona 1 fanart, specifically of Maki Sonomura. Under the day's theme: "Ring", I conveyed Maki's fragmented selves around her pendant. For those who've played the game, Mai, Aki and Ideal Maki surround the pendant, with a faceless confused Maki in the middle. Below is Pandora, her Jungian shadow, in both forms and in a shadowy background. Diagonal of Ideal Maki, is her persona, Maso. Finally, there's the real Maki, hiding her face, her persona of her true self...

Unfortunately, I couldn't fit my whole 11 x 14 ink drawing through my 8 x 14 scanner. If you want a better of picture of this, tell me in the comments. Also, constructive criticism is welcomed.