MANGA LOGO ART WIP

We, @Moonliightartist are in production of of our own manga, "Awaiting Death with Disease-chan". So to brief, we'd like to receive some critique on our series' logo. We've already revised it once. But, we'd like to hear more suggestions. Thank You and have a nice day!!

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